Yeah

                       Talk about
echocryptic heartzyme
is heard
autosending pitchmaps
                           we write
burnhanded lipmelt
it’s the
brainbeaming viralswitch
                              they got
fivespiraled nectarlicks
how’s your
spaghettibark dreambot
                     there’s some
lovebombs on the shelf

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9 thoughts on “Yeah

  1. Sophie Eden

    I really enjoyed all the new words you created from existing words. It makes me think of a highly technological future world. I like how every few lines you offset the start of a new thought with two words. It gives it a quick, choppy flow which suits it.

    Have you read “Sea Oak” by George Saunders? This poem reminds me a little bit of that story because it’s a future world where some of the terms have changed, yet it’s recognizable.

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